Chapter 3
Maximilian von Karajan (3)
âEven if heâs a villain, if heâs too obvious, itâs boring. So you should make him something less predictable.â
âStart with a noble cause. At first, he genuinely wants a new world, but as time passes, he becomes intoxicated with power and changesâthat kind of development is good.â
âFor the first purge, make sure he only targets truly bad people. That way, the villain still feels justified.â
âItâs okay if the targets of the villain are portrayed somewhat simply. If you make everything too complex, it gets messy.â
As I looked at Tonali, I recalled the words my editor once said to meâadvice on how to portray Karajan. I didnât know why those words were coming back to me now.
âYou should answer. Whatâs the point of just staring at someone?â
He was incredibly perceptive. He immediately noticed that I was lost in thought while looking at him. Perhaps that sharp awareness was a politicianâs instinct.
âWe were discussing what we would advocate if we attended the upcoming Tri-Council meeting. What are your thoughts? For reference, Assemblyman Tonali said he would adjust food prices so that people can live safely.â
The moderator repeated the question to keep the discussion flowing. I mulled over it. It was clearly asking what the public desiredâand how well we understood it.
At those words, I remembered a line I had written: âThe people suffer due to the food crisis.â It had only been a single line to set the backgroundâŚ
âI donât want to starve!â
âWeâre not asking to be full! Just let us not starve!â
âLet us afford food!â
The party members watching the debate shouted out their pain. I quietly observed them. Many looked as if they hadnât eaten for days. Despite the cold, they wore tattered, worn-out clothes, barely standing.
Right. This is a world I created. Itâs only right that I change it.
âI intend to propose eliminating the root cause of hunger.â
âAnd how exactly do you plan to eliminate that root cause?â
Tonali immediately seized on my words.
âNo, you need to clearly say what youâre going to do like I did. Ahâdo you lack the knowledge to explain it?â
As I considered how to respond, he added a mocking tone, as if seasoning his earlier attack.
But it didnât affect me much. If adjusting food prices alone could solve hunger, the Tri-Council wouldnât have been convened three times already.
âAre you truly confident that your method can solve our hunger?â
I had taken two hits. Now it was time to strike back.
âHah! Are you saying thereâs something wrong with my method? Wheat prices have skyrocketed, so Iâm proposing that the government control them. That way we can buy wheat at stable prices and make bread. Isnât that right?â
Tonali raised his voice, appealing to the crowd.
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I calmly scanned the audience. In their eyes hung a strange fruit of illusionâthat Tonali would somehow save them. And I was about to knock all those illusions to the ground.
âWell⌠if you impose price controls, sellers will try to buy wheat even cheaper than before. They wonât want their profits reduced. And who ends up taking the loss? The farmers who grow the wheat. In other words, us.â
As I spoke calmly, the crowd began to murmur.
âNo! Even if profits shrink a little, wheat becomes cheaper! Everyoneâs situation improves!â
âThatâs not how it works.â
I continued thinking about how Karajan would leave a strong impression on the masses.
Belief.
A vague belief that Maximilian von Karajan would solve their hardships.
Belief that someone intelligent like him could create a new world.
Today, I would make them believe that Iânot Tonaliâwas the one who would bring a storm of reform.
âLetâs think about what you said. You believe that lowering wheat prices will lower overall prices, correct?â
This was a world I had written. Its understanding of economics wasnât advanced. There were economists, but their work focused more on controlling merchants than understanding economics itself.
Even a high school level of economic knowledge would surpass anyone here. They probably didnât even know the concept of the âinvisible hand.â
âThatâs right! Of course it will!â
âReally? Even if wheat prices fall, production costs donât decrease. And taxes on farmers donât go down either, do they?â
âWell, thatâ!â
Just as expected. Without proper economic knowledge, Tonali faltered.
âHmph! Then do you have a solution? At least Iâm trying to fix things. Youâre just nitpicking my ideas!â
He wasnât going down easily. Instead of attacking the message, he attacked the messenger, trying to present himself as superior. Some of his supporters jeered at me as well.
âWhat do you think the root cause is?â
I asked calmly.
âWhat? You donât even know?â
âI have an idea, but I wanted to learn if you had something better. Though I doubt thereâs much to learn.â
âWhat? Listen carefully. Wheat prices skyrocketed because of the Hayes Treaty with the Kingdom of Bron. So Iâll propose strictly separating export and domestic wheat prices.â
A treaty I hadnât written about. My head throbbed, but I stayed calm and inferred from future events.
If the treaty had truly caused everything, many characters would have called for its repeal. But I had never written that.
âWheat was already expensive before the Hayes Treaty.â
âThatâs not true.â
ââŚAssemblyman.â
My tone changed. Tension crept across his face.
âItâs one thing if you donât understand the peopleâs situation. But forcing false claims is another matter. Weâre here to debate, not to make fools of ourselves.â
âWhat? Foolish?â
His face flushed red, though a trace of composure remained in his eyes.
âKarajan! If you want to debate, present your own solution instead of attacking me! Otherwise, it just means you have nothing prepared!â
As expected, he wasnât easily broken.
âI do. At the Tri-Council, I will strongly advocate tax redistribution.â
One of the triggers of the civil revolution was taxation. Under the current system, clergy and nobles paid nothing. Only commoners bore the burden.
War and famine had drained the kingdomâs finances. The king borrowed from nobles and even sold future tax collection rights. Those nobles squeezed the people mercilessly.
People were starving. Yet the clergy and nobles didnât care.
âHahaha! Tax redistribution? You want nobles and clergy to pay taxes? Unbelievable!â
Tonali mocked me, and some of his supporters laughed along.
Not a single voice opposed him. Even unjust laws had become accepted as tradition.
But that would change.
âSee? You canât even respond!â
He grew louder, emboldened.
Then I noticed something inside his collarâand recalled a line I had written:
âThe red marks on his neck looked like a path for the blade.â
âRed-spotted Torino.â
Tonali froze.
âAh. Thatâs right.â
I had written his alias, not his real name.
âIs that why you hate taxation? Because youâre a purchased noble who doesnât have to pay it?â
I smirked.
âWhat nonsense! Purchased noble?â
The crowd began whispering. Doubt spread rapidly.
âWhy would I oppose taxes?! Youâre the one being ridiculous!â
His voice turned desperate.
âReally? Because it sounds like you hate paying taxesâas a noble.â
âIâm not a noble!â
âHmm. The red spots on your neck⌠quite distinctive. Hard to forget.â
âStop talking nonsense!â
He was losing composure completely.
âFrançoise Rino Tonali.â
My voice droppedâlow, heavy, threatening.
Silence filled the hall.
âStop deceiving me, our party, and the tens of thousands of people.â
My voice carried overwhelming charismaâKarajanâs innate power.
Tonali trembled in fear. The crowd turned on him with disgustâand toward me with hope.
ââŚKarajan.â
âKarajan.â
âKARAJAN! KARAJAN!â
Their voices rang out with sincerity.
I smiled confidently.
This is a world I created.
And I will save them with my own hands.






